echoes travel
through air vents
sounds sit like
pieces of raw meat
in the sun
flies slide down
the walls where
sweat gathers
in the small
of your back.
unutterable
echoes travel
through air vents
sounds sit like
pieces of raw meat
in the sun
flies slide down
the walls where
sweat gathers
in the small
of your back.
What a compact piece, with its solid imagery. All senses accounted for. Loved the title, too (very functional).
Cheers.