cigarettes will kill you

i think freud would think i’m still stuck in the oral stage
i just want you in my mouth i want to suck you like a cigarette

inhaling in

the time it takes

as i take you in.

6 thoughts on “cigarettes will kill you

  1. jes

    ah, ness, if only you knew- you’re not being literal- you’re just taking the metaphor to another fucking level.

    ps. i think nicorettes will kill you too.

    x

  2. Newman Sans Visibilité

    Ben Lee’s most well-known song was preemptively named after this post.

    Everything that comes out of his mouth is like a turd falling into my drink.

  3. jes

    i think i’m gonna start naming all my poems after ben lee songs because i like the thought of turds falling in your drink, pete.

    maybe i’ll change the title of the “slot city” poem to “gamble everything for love”

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